May 1, 2002

- Motion meeting changed to Sunday at 5pm

- animatics reviewed.... changes below:

-CA-020 needs bridge to CA-040

-SB-010 pull out further back

-SB-020 closer in on her torso

-SB-050 start push in closer

-SB-130 dad should leap out of chair

-SB-180 run in from the left to the window

-SB-180 push in a little

-SB-200 possibly change to camera following newspaper, chases mother bee in to house, afollow dad with newspaper as he runs around,

follow nespaper down to smack the bee (zoom)

swat with right hand

as soon as newspaper hits, cut...

-CS-110 smooth out the camera work

keep camera steady

don't see other table

dissolves needed

-CB-120 not so much push in

-AD-010 too long

-AD-020 too long

-AD-030 too long

-AD-050 dissolve in

-CC-210 transition needs work (possible dissolves)

-CC-230 subtler, 10% zoom, center on the last dad in the drawing

-LA-020 tap his arm

-LA-025 slide books over so he doesn't have to twist so much

-LA-040 over the right shoulder

-CD-perp (after LA-050) closer to the umbrella

-FB-010 start closer

don't need to dwell on images

possible multiple shots

- motion reference was evaluated by Karen.... changes below:

-CA-030 letter shorter (we've already seen it)

-CA-040 immediately look around again

do something to relax (lean back maybe?...)

no dead, bored time

show her trying to relax (creates tension)

-SB-020 a hair too long

-SB-050 starts at actual thought (condense)

no repeat thought

just a look with the eyes, no need to look around

-SB-160 only one change of emotion per shot

-CB-110 maybe wipe the fly off and/or flick it away...

stay focused on the fly - don't look around until after she gets rid of the fly

look around... turns into -> "He's still not here, back to doodling..."

-AD-010 dad looks & smiles

-AD-020 she looks & smiles

-LA-020 should be his idea to get the book... (she shouldn't point to it)

-CS-360 shouldn't be a smile, maybe even embarrasment, dissappointment

after touch, hesitate.. "Could be BioDad..."

anticipate

recognition

disappointment

acceptance

-CE-410 could be shown to a table

Alan Shaw points to the table (guy from The Lift)

don't sit until AFTER reading the note...

-CE-420 remains standing

-CE-430 sits HERE

- test shot was reviewed

- 3D-2D machines were reviewed